The distinctive hips of swagger
Hair like Slash, moves like Jagger
Surely there is more to me
Than sex and drugs and what you see
A second thought, a need for pause
A giving to a needy cause
Revealed within the spotlight’s beam
I’m just as shallow as I seem.
cosmic zeitgeist pulse
launch of a fragile ego
orbit Trappist-1
soar high, ultra-cool dwarf star!
detractors light years away…
Tanka inspired by Marissa Bergen’s poetic prose. Marissa is a poet, music writer, musician and rock and roll supermum. She is one of the first blogging connections I made and I will always look back on my early days of motherhood and blogging and remember how Marissa’s posts made me laugh at 1 am, 3 am, 3:20 am, 4:53am etc for close to a year (they’re the times when I read, not the frequency of her posting…I no longer read her posts at wtf o’clock). Marissa really shines in her recent turn as a music journo, complimented by her knowledge and first-hand experience in the world of music, having been a rock star since the earlier part of her misspent youth, and still burning the flame penning lyrics and making music with her family band The Cheesbergens. I would put a link to Marissa’s chapbook right here if she hurried up and created it 🙂 Thanks Marissa!
Half a Haibun is an ongoing (and occasional) feature here at 10000hoursleft. A collaborative project with bloggers I admire- they write the prose that I then use as inspiration for a tanka or haiku. The intention being that together, we’ll create a whole; 2 halves converging to add a richness and complexity to one another, in the form of a haibun.
Others in the series:
Half a Haibun 1: The Unhappy Wife (with K E Garland)
Half a Haibun 2: Shack (with Robert Okaji)
Half a Haibun 3: Naomi (with Leslie Reese)
Thank you so much for publishing and the shining bio. I am not worthy!!
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You’re welcome- thanks for joining me! And yes, you are worthy!!! 🙌👍👏💕
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This one made me laugh…good medicine for the morning. (K)
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Dr’s Marissa and Mek at your service 😊
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I’m a fan of Marissa’s also. I loved her unique humor in poetry. Interesting collaboration. ❤
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Yes- she’s great- always interesting and unexpected subject matter and funny twists in her poem.
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She’s a creative wonder.
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Yes, she is! 😊
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Your language is so energetic – that IS a type of medicine!😊Going to visit Marissa’s blog, now.
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Thank you so much Leslie – your comment raises my energy 💕
Yes, do check her out- she has a great, irreverant sense of humour and picks the most surprising topics to write about.
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Inspiring! I like “… launch of a fragile ego …”. Makes you feel as if anything is possible …
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Thanks. And anything IS possible 😊
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Absolutely!
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😊
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